Re: [Ssio-2018] new brochure draft!
Agreed looks great to me. +1 on Phil's box character; it's also a box on the standard Mac Preview app, so I think it's a problem baked into the PDF itself. Also under "Accelerating Scientific Discovery" on the same page, the "For in situ analysis," line ends in a question mark, but the "For streaming analysis" does not. I think the latter should also end with a question mark to harmonize with the previous sentence. Otherwise this is a delicious morsel. Glenn On Thu, Jun 27, 2019 at 1:37 PM Carns, Philip H. via ssio-2018 < [email protected]> wrote:
Looks great!
One minor comment, though. It's possible that this is a glitch in my pdf renderer, but something looks off in the text of the first paragraph of the "Improving Efficiency..." section on page 3. I think maybe it is supposed to be "node-local", but there is some sort of box character where the dash would be.
thanks, -Phil ------------------------------ *From:* ssio-2018 <[email protected]> on behalf of Ross, Robert B. via ssio-2018 <[email protected]> *Sent:* Thursday, June 27, 2019 3:15 PM *To:* Settlemyer, Bradley Wade via ssio-2018 *Subject:* [Ssio-2018] new brochure draft!
I think we're looking pretty good. Comments? -- Rob
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