I agree with the items that Phil and Glenn noted. I don’t see other issues. Also, I like the new photo on the back. It’s much better than the last one! Thanks for doing this! Kathryn From: ssio-2018 <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Glenn Lockwood via ssio-2018 Sent: Thursday, June 27, 2019 2:18 PM To: Carns, Philip H. <[email protected]> Cc: Settlemyer, Bradley Wade via ssio-2018 <[email protected]> Subject: Re: [Ssio-2018] new brochure draft! Agreed looks great to me. +1 on Phil's box character; it's also a box on the standard Mac Preview app, so I think it's a problem baked into the PDF itself. Also under "Accelerating Scientific Discovery" on the same page, the "For in situ analysis," line ends in a question mark, but the "For streaming analysis" does not. I think the latter should also end with a question mark to harmonize with the previous sentence. Otherwise this is a delicious morsel. Glenn On Thu, Jun 27, 2019 at 1:37 PM Carns, Philip H. via ssio-2018 <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: Looks great! One minor comment, though. It's possible that this is a glitch in my pdf renderer, but something looks off in the text of the first paragraph of the "Improving Efficiency..." section on page 3. I think maybe it is supposed to be "node-local", but there is some sort of box character where the dash would be. thanks, -Phil ________________________________ From: ssio-2018 <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> on behalf of Ross, Robert B. via ssio-2018 <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Sent: Thursday, June 27, 2019 3:15 PM To: Settlemyer, Bradley Wade via ssio-2018 Subject: [Ssio-2018] new brochure draft! I think we're looking pretty good. Comments? -- Rob _______________________________________________ ssio-2018 mailing list [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> https://lists.mcs.anl.gov/mailman/listinfo/ssio-2018 _______________________________________________ ssio-2018 mailing list [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> https://lists.mcs.anl.gov/mailman/listinfo/ssio-2018