Hi Martin, I really like the examples and animation you added to slide 2! Now that you have that, I think you can remove some of the text from slide 3 to make it less dense without losing information, e.g. the examples of variables. I edited slide 3 so that it's somewhat less dense but still something that I think Rich can read from and get the information we want across (attached slide 3). Also, there was a typo in slide 3 that I think you will want to fix in any case: "if the MPI implementation support this" change support to supports. Kathryn
-----Original Message----- From: [email protected] [mailto:mpi3-tools- [email protected]] On Behalf Of Bronis R. de Supinski Sent: Friday, November 05, 2010 3:58 AM To: [email protected] Subject: Re: [Mpi3-tools] New Version of MPI BoF Slides
Martin:
Re:
It took me a while to get back to it, but here is a new version of the slides for the MPI BoF. Note that slides 3,5 and 6 are hidden and only for the web version.
I hope this includes most/all of the suggestions - let me know if you have any further comments (we need to wrap this up very soon, though).
The animated MPIT slide is good. I tweaked the animation slightly in the attached so that each examples text box appears just after the relevant animation.
Also, I thought we agreed that we would not use hidden slides as it is confusing. In any event, I think you need some words on MPIT even with the animation. Further, the hidden MPIR texxt slide was almost identical to the unhidden one. I unhid all of the slides in the attached and merged the two MPIR text slides. A good tweak would be to animate the MPIR process figure but that would be above and beyond.
Overall the current version does put us a couple slides over the request. However, it goes over due to the graphic slides, whichwill help to make the talk more interesting so I would hope that Rich would be OK with that.
Bronis