Bill, I'm not sure, whether you get the email automatically through ticket 77 because you are not on the CC list. Therefore here the same text as in the ticket: Because final MPI-2.2 meeting is approaching soon, I checked also this ticket. Here some details. All page:linenumbers are based on review-pdf from svn revision 384. - svn384_xxii:22 - "Jeffrey M." instead of "Jeff" - svn384_xxii:22 - add "; MPI-2.1 Secretary" - svn384_xxiii:3 - "The HDF Group" instead of "HDF Group" - svn384_xxiii:25 - "SUN Microsystems, Inc.", i.e., with "s Inc." - svn384_xxiv:2 - There was a comment, to make plural ("Communications"), but the chapter title is singular. - svn384_xxiv:7 - ", Info-Object", i.e., with comma after "Träff" - svn384_xxiv:16 - add "; MPI-2.2 Secretary" - svn384_xxiv:19 - "Bindings" instead of "bindings" - svn384_xxiv:23 - remove "This list needs to be checked ..." - svn384_xxiv:40 - "Jeffrey M." instead of "Jeff" - svn384_xxv:10 - remove line with "HLRS" (it is already there on xxv:36) - svn384_xxv:14 - please check, for full name of "Inst. Adv. Sci. & Eng. - svn384_xxiii:38-40 and svn384_xxv:41-43 - should you write the two sentences in both locations in the same sequence? When I understood correctly, then NSF has funded more than HDF. - MPI-2.1_4:19, you added new text. One list item is "Any extension must have significant benefit for users". The period at the end of the sentence is missing. Best regards Rolf Dr. Rolf Rabenseifner . . . . . . . . . .. email rabenseifner_at_[hidden] High Performance Computing Center (HLRS) . phone ++49(0)711/685-65530 University of Stuttgart . . . . . . . . .. fax ++49(0)711 / 685-65832 Head of Dpmt Parallel Computing . . . www.hlrs.de/people/rabenseifner Nobelstr. 19, D-70550 Stuttgart, Germany . (Office: Allmandring 30)